Warrior Princess

What up girlfriend? Liked your story a lot. I am always drawn to stories about slaves in America, being a huge (and I mean HUGE) fan of Uncle Tom's Cabin, ...

Hey girlfriend--this is the most interesting thing I've read on YWS in quite a while! Personally I'm like running_with_the_devil; I always love twists on fairy tales and such. And the ...

This poem is kind of in the Plains of Asphodel right now. (For those of you ignorant of Greek mythology, that was the place where souls who were neither good ...

Well, I disagree with the first two replies. I LOVED IT!!!!! If you read some of my own stuff, you'll find that this is very much my kind of poetry: ...

You have good imagery and descriptions here, maybe a little too much. Have you seen 10,000 B.C.? OMG that is like my fave movie, and this kind of reminded me ...

Whoa...interesting. I didn't completely get it, but abstract is a highly respected art form, and this was definitely abstract. I liked it though, because it has some very unique imagery, ...

Wow, interesting and exciting. You have a good thing going here. Of course, you can't expect me to be too critical; I'm a sucker for action anything. Syte said the ...

Gee. This poem made me sad! It conveys a good amount of emotion, which is good, but I think it might be a little bit too concise, too abrupt. I ...

Hey, this is great stuff! I can't really find anything to nitpick so instead I shall praise your creativity. I love "Annabel Lee," but I would have never thought about ...

Wicked awesome, baby!!! :smt081 (Sorry, I say that a lot, don't I?) Kyle is so hot (he's you, that must be why! :smt054 ) and that car-jump he does was ...

Hi it's me again! You certainly have a good plot, lots of potential for action and adventure and suspense and all that other great stuff! :D I especially like the ...

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! You got something going here, kiddo! :idea: A nice government thriller, sounds like. Of course, i am a sucker for action/adventure fiction of any kind, so ...

This is very good, Tyler! You present two important issues that seem to interest the world today: the presidential race (Obama vs. McCain) and the origin of the world (evolution ...

OMG. YWS has discovered a new talent! Your work is extemely interesting. I wish you hadn't stopped so soon! Is your story set during the Salem Witch Trials? It sounds ...

A very pretty poem, sad and wistful. :cry: However, I would like to know what you mean by "do you mind if I stay?" Is the poem about a boyfriend ...